Friday, 27 October 2017

Language features

This week I have been using a range of language features to help make my writing more descriptive. Some language features we have been talking about are similes, metaphors, personification and onomatopoeia.

This is a writing that is my favorite of the week.

I can smell prideness when I was running with the soccer ball for a goal.When I went for a goal I felt really nervous because I had butterflies in my stomach but when I scored a goal I felt better because people were cheering for.Bang Bang! When I went for a goal I didn’t get any butterflies in my stomach I felt really proud of myself.When the ref whistled the whistle it felt good for me when I heard the whistle it felt great! For me.The sound of my team when I got the goal it felt like they were bullying me but they were not.When I got that goal they ran up to me and jumped on me and it felt good and great and I was proud of myself.

Wednesday, 13 September 2017

The crazy world of science

Hi bloggers today I had the best day of my life!
Today the whole school  was lucky that they had the crazy world of science!.Also did you know the science is all about magic.One  thing that I wanted to talk about science  was the experiments of the grain powder.First the grain is all inside a bottle and  what happens  is the grain gets tip out  and  the grain goes inside the cup.Also the oxygen can surround the grain of particks. Then we get a lighter and we turn on the switch  but you need a supervisor to do this and  when your supervisor turn's on the switch on the lighter the flame will pop out of nowhere.Also inside the flame is heat,oxygen and  fuel inside the flame.Then once you have put all the ingredients you will see fire pop out of nowhere and the fire will be big and cool.

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Wednesday, 30 August 2017

awsome zoo trip

Hi every body I am back!

Today we went in the hall with the three classes and we went and we sat in a line with our teachers. When we sat and we were quiet. Miss Fortes was reminding us about our Hay Park School  rules and our rules were  to be respectful,resilient and responsible and the most  important  rule is to thank the ritches and the warehouse because the warehouse let us go to the Auckland zoo for free so we don't have to waste our money and also Ritches because they let us on the bus for free and that is really nice so that is why we thank them a lot.When we went there was only two buses and room nine and some kids of room 8 went in one bus and room 6 went on the other bus.When we went on the bus to the zoo we were all quiet and we also did a challenge and the challenge was how many people will wave to you.Then we went under the knew tunnel and it was so dark and kind of fun as well and it took a while to finish the tunnel and when we got out of the tunnel we were at the motat and we went past it and we saw western spring then we saw the  sign that said Auckland zoo.Next what we did  is that we had to wait until Miss fortes  gives us a signal  to come out of the bus.Then when we got out of the bus we had to get in a line like we normally do at school.Then we went inside the Auckland zoo and when we went we saw a man and his name was John and he asked us a question and the question was what is my favorite  native bird?.Also John was  our   instructor for  our trip to  the native birds and  there was names and the names are kaka,tui,kea,wood pigeon and  the takahe. Then we  went on a trip to look at birds with John and it was kind of fun with John as well.Then we went to find a place to eat for morning tea and some people were because they had to walk around and their feet were sore.Then we traveled to Africa and Australia.Also when I went to Africa with my class and we saw tigers,lions,otters,turtles,fishes and more.Then we went to Australia and we saw a giraffe,zebra,flamingos,elephants and orangutan but we didn't get to see a real orangutan but that was sad.


Friday, 18 August 2017

Egg time

Last Friday we got to have some eggs it is not the eggs that we eat it is the chicken egg.There was this lady and her name was Jo and she works for living eggs.Also she talked threw about the chicken egg and after she talks threw about the chicken eggs there are egg monitors.Every single day the egg monitors have to fill in the water tray inside the incubator and also they have to clean the incubator and the brutal.Also they have to clean inside the brutal and what they do is that our teacher Miss Fortes  she will get out the little chickens and one person that is a egg monitor they have to hold a box and put newspaper inside and Miss fortes can get out the chicks and place them inside of the box.Then the other egg monitor cleans the brutal and picks up the paper towel and they also take out the news paper and they take out the water cup and the food cup and the egg monitor goes with the water cup and fills it while anthor egg monitor gets the food cup and fill it in with chicken food.Also here are the names of the egg monitor





What i observed from the past four days that the chicken it takes it time to crack out of a chicken egg and when it comes out of the egg it is wet and that is why we put the eggs inside of a incubator and the warmness should only be up to 37.7 degrees Celsius.Also I notice that when it comes out  of the egg it doesn't come out and its already fluffy you just have to wait some time.Also it tries to stand up but it doesn't and if you be quiet in your class you would hear it chirping and the same as the other chicks that are ready to be born.When they are ready to go in the brutal the teacher desides when it can go inside and what time.Scroll down! and there is my video

Incredibox video

Hi I wish you enjoy this video! and also comment on this blog post as well!.BYE!

Monday, 24 July 2017

How to embed a goggle drawing on your blog

This is my screen castfiy
Hi bloggers here is a screen castify of how to embed a google drawing.
I wish you enjoy listening to it.
By Andrew

Saturday, 22 July 2017

My hoilday

kia ora bloggers  and welcome to my blog  today i will be writing about my holiday 

In the Holiday  i went over to my cousin and we played on his Xbox 360 and it was so fun that we couldn't stop playing on it.So my cousin fassalia he loves to play on his Xbox so much.So when he played on the Xbox i went on my chrome book and did some home work and also my other cousin Matthias  was at my cousins  fassalia's  house and that house was fassalia's    house and  his family's my other cousin brought  his chrome book and we had dinner and  our dinner was KFC.It was nice then when it went late in the night we all fell asleep.Then the next day we went back on our device and it was a nice sunny day and that day me and my other cousin Matthias we had to go with our uncle  outside to do the  lawn mower and it was fun and kind of tricky for us.Then me and my other cousin we got droped off back home and it was so cold when we got out. It was like we were in ice.

The end

I wish you enjoy reading this.  

By Andrew 


Thursday, 11 May 2017

Kia Toa perfomace

Bonjour and welcome to my blog post

Today i was lucky enough to see Bernard Mangakahia perform   for our school.His show was  fabulous
and amazing because he did a great dance in front of the whole school.He was resilience and he told us a story about his favorite  grand ma and his dad in law  then he did a sass dance for us and we had to follow his actions to the dance.His dad at the back of us he said that his dad was in the new zealand  army and he survived.Then Bernard climb up the mountain  of Africa  and  Bernard travels around the country's.He doesn't get to see his son's because they are in different country's and they were born in those country's.He showed us a fire stick dance and it took him eight years to practice and he went so fast as possible and he was shouting to us because the song was to loud and he told us what he had to do..

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resilience stories with me.

Thursday, 4 May 2017

Starting term two with a push

Talofa lava  and welcome back to term two.

Today pohatu class had skateboarding  today and we had elbow pads,knee pads,helmet,wrist pads and we had skateboards.We had to sit in a semi circle and our skateboarding coach was Aidan and Mikayla. Then we all had to get a helmet and then we had to go back to our semi circle place and inside the helmet was the knee pads,elbow and wrist pads  Aidan told us to un clip the  helmet and then we had to to take all of the skate board equipment out of the helmet.Then he told us to put on the elbow pad and it was kind of tricky for some of us to put on the elbow pad.So first you had to find the empty  side of the elbow pad then you had to un wrap the word that say's shift.Also on the other side of the elbow pad it said shift as well so you have to do un wrap it again like you were un wrapping the other word that say's shift.Next you have to put it on like you are putting a plaster on your knee and on the knee pad there will be a empty bit and the empty bit is where you put it on your knee.Next you you get the word that say's

Tuesday, 11 April 2017

Embedding a google drawing

KIA oar my following bloggers  Today I been learning how to embed a google drawing into a blog post.This was challenging  because I learned how to do this last year but  i stall  know  all of the steps and i really enjoyed it with Miss fortes.I really enjoyed  doing a quick  refresher lesson with with Miss fortes.
This is a google drawing I created.It is about being  resilient and respect ful and responsible and that is the hay park way and that is part of the hay park way.