kia ora bloggers and welcome to my blog today i will be writing about my holiday
In the Holiday i went over to my cousin and we played on his Xbox 360 and it was so fun that we couldn't stop playing on it.So my cousin fassalia he loves to play on his Xbox so much.So when he played on the Xbox i went on my chrome book and did some home work and also my other cousin Matthias was at my cousins fassalia's house and that house was fassalia's house and his family's my other cousin brought his chrome book and we had dinner and our dinner was KFC.It was nice then when it went late in the night we all fell asleep.Then the next day we went back on our device and it was a nice sunny day and that day me and my other cousin Matthias we had to go with our uncle outside to do the lawn mower and it was fun and kind of tricky for us.Then me and my other cousin we got droped off back home and it was so cold when we got out. It was like we were in ice.
The end
I wish you enjoy reading this.
By Andrew
hello Andrew i like your video it is cool
ReplyDeleteYou said it was a nice and sunny day then when you got out it got cold like ice?
ReplyDeleteYou said it was a nice and sunny day then when you got out it got cold like ice?
ReplyDeleteHi Andrew, my name is Llewellyn. cool story, I really think it was cool. If I was you I probably would not do my homework but stay on the x-box. I think you should work on putting spaces after full stops.
ReplyDeleteTuhinga o mua (bye in Maori)
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ReplyDeleteki ora my name is whakahotu and i go to kkps
ReplyDeleteand make sure you put full stops we you need to. try to put more detail like tell us what one of hes favourite game is and try to yous descriptive words
Make sure you put a full stop. Between holiday and the word i. But nice story i still liked reading it.
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