Language features

This week I have been using a range of language features to help make my writing more descriptive. Some language features we have been talking about are similes, metaphors, personification and onomatopoeia.


This is a writing that is my favorite of the week.

I can smell prideness when I was running with the soccer ball for a goal.When I went for a goal I felt really nervous because I had butterflies in my stomach but when I scored a goal I felt better because people were cheering for.Bang Bang! When I went for a goal I didn’t get any butterflies in my stomach I felt really proud of myself.When the ref whistled the whistle it felt good for me when I heard the whistle it felt great! For me.The sound of my team when I got the goal it felt like they were bullying me but they were not.When I got that goal they ran up to me and jumped on me and it felt good and great and I was proud of myself.